I really enjoyed this, the art especially had a charming touch with how the different elements of paper drawings were included in sections like the background. Overall, while I was wanting more ways to understand the relationship between Eva and Mary, the humor and drama of the situation was still very gripping and very enjoyable!
The choice with the art meant a lot to me, despite starting with some basic and clean art, I realised that it didn't mean anything to the story. It didn't mean anything to me!
the rough style is as much a part of the story as the words are, at least to me.
p.s - like I wrote at the end, the story is much fuller than this! I just knew that I couldn't get it all in for the jam- a real shame but necessary
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I really enjoyed this, the art especially had a charming touch with how the different elements of paper drawings were included in sections like the background. Overall, while I was wanting more ways to understand the relationship between Eva and Mary, the humor and drama of the situation was still very gripping and very enjoyable!
thank you :)
The choice with the art meant a lot to me, despite starting with some basic and clean art, I realised that it didn't mean anything to the story. It didn't mean anything to me!
the rough style is as much a part of the story as the words are, at least to me.
p.s - like I wrote at the end, the story is much fuller than this! I just knew that I couldn't get it all in for the jam- a real shame but necessary